My successes and failure making my song

This is the song I will be performing at the gig called "you got me".

How I started to make was listening to a song called grass ain't greener by Chris brown and like the chords he used so I learnt the chords and used them and the main part of the song. the chords are

F*
Ab
Bbm
Ab
Db Sus2











I played the chords twice for the sustain which give it a more rhythmical complex sounding to it.

I use a pad to play these chords cause I really liked how it sounded with it but there was a problem when it was playing. It was making popping sounds and I had to get rid of it. How I want about getting rid of it was by using the EQ plug in.

These got rid of all that popping noise which gave it a much smoother sounding for the pads. 

With lyrics I got help with a few of level 3 performance students at the start. Being influence by there lyrics I started writing my own lyrics based on the subject they wrote about which is about love towards a person. I failed on coming up with a significant chorus for the song but a came to an understanding that it really doesn't need it and instead came up with a repetition saying "my feelings" so it give it a sense of resonance. Also, I wanted to copy a technique from one of J Cole's song "Crooked Smile" where at the chorus Its repeated. While recording the lyrics onto logic I used Reverb and Echo on all of the audio tracks.

I use buses to send it straight to the track so the have the some level and some sounding Reverb/Echo. for my vocals (Excluding my rap verse) I used pitch correction cause it sounded good with my voice for the song.

performing my song to Olly he gave feedbacks on my vocals and how I should project them in the song. he said I should "support my top notes more" throughout the I've been coming up with ways to go about that and I've researched on singing techniques. 

here some singing technique

These are the song i was going to do but I didn't come around to cause I was to focused on one song so my time management was poor when it came to dividing my time spent on each songs.

Bibliography

Bibliography

JazzPianoOnline (2015) JazzPianoOnline.Com. Available at: http://www.jazzpianoonline.com/jazz-piano-lessons/chords-voicings/#sthash.CtNgyP5u.dpbs (Accessed: 23 May 2016).

Citations, Quotes & Annotations

JazzPianoOnline (2015) JazzPianoOnline.Com. Available at: http://www.jazzpianoonline.com/jazz-piano-lessons/chords-voicings/#sthash.CtNgyP5u.dpbs (Accessed: 23 May 2016).

(JazzPianoOnline, 2015)

These reference are about jazz chords and voicing on the piano. i wanted to look up on these cause J cole, one of my favourite artist, uses most of the time of jazz chords and voicing in his music. so being influenced by him I wanted to know how he goes about playing his chords and i came across these.

In these I've fount of that jazz players uses complex and rich progression chords to keep their music interesting. A device that jazz player sometimes uses are cluster chords to add tone diversity 
within their music.  

Bibliography

Williams, T.J. (2014) How to sing high notes without straining your voice. Available at: http://www.howtobecomeaprofessionalsinger.com/how-to-sing-high-notes-without-straining-your-voice/ (Accessed: 5 June 2016).

Citations, Quotes & Annotations

Williams, T.J. (2014) How to sing high notes without straining your voice. Available at: http://www.howtobecomeaprofessionalsinger.com/how-to-sing-high-notes-without-straining-your-voice/ (Accessed: 5 June 2016).

(Williams, 2014)

This is a web page about singing techniques and how to effectively sing and project high note. Reason for researching this is cause I was told I had to support my high notes and this page should me how to do it effectively and it work well. 

Bibliography

PianoGroove (2016) Cluster Voicings for jazz piano. Available at: https://www.pianogroove.com/jazz-piano-lessons/cluster-voicings/ (Accessed: 23 May 2016).

Citations, Quotes & Annotations

PianoGroove (2016) Cluster Voicings for jazz piano. Available at: https://www.pianogroove.com/jazz-piano-lessons/cluster-voicings/ (Accessed: 23 May 2016).

(PianoGroove, 2016)

This shows me how cluster voicing works in jazz which I find interesting but I still don't understand like why people uses it.  Because most hip hop artist have cluster chords in their music and I want to include that in my music cause I loved how it sounded and the feeling it gave to thorough out the mix of the song.  

Bibliography

Lyric writing – how to write better lyrics (no date) Available at: http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/lyric-writing.html (Accessed: 9 June 2016).

Citations, Quotes & Annotations

Lyric writing – how to write better lyrics (no date) Available at: http://www.ultimatesongwriting.com/lyric-writing.html (Accessed: 9 June 2016).

(Lyric writing – how to write better lyrics, no date)

This is a page that show different way of coming up and writing lyrics for any genre of music. some tips were to write about a personal event or experience that happen to me or to someone I know/knew. For my song I decided to write about love towards someone beside my family due to what i was feeling when making the song.  

Key Song Analysis

Power trip by J Cole.

Chords:


In this song the chords he uses for the chores are 

Bb minor
Ab major
Gb major 7th

the verses has a sample from Hubert Law called no more of a flute that goes on through out the verses of the song. the key in Minor to give it a more subtle feeling to it.

Melody:

with the melody is mostly from the sampled flute accompanied by the vocals. the sampled flute is used for the chorus and cut out in the verse for the vocals.

Tempo/Rhythm:

For the tempo for this track is in the middle from fast and slow to give it that chilled vibe and it never changes. the rhythm of the song is mainly made by the drums and the percussion within the song. The rhythm is very bouncy and will definitely get your feet moving.

Mix:

The song was very well mixed from how all the instrumentals and EQ are balanced out from one another. The loudest in the song would have to go to the kick drum. reason for this to be the loudest in mix is to get you to move or bump your head to the song. I would describe the kick punchy and thick to get that "in your face feel"

Instrumentation:

This song has a lot of instrument play different chords different melodies differently. First, we got the strings playing the chords above accompanied with piano playing the same chords complementing on another. Next, we have the sampled flutes that provides the melody for the song which helps out with the backing vocals. finally, as said for the mix what keeps the rhythm is the drums. reason for using strings and the piano as the chords is cause it has a chilled vibe to it so you can appreciate all te effort he put into making the song and same could be said for the sampled flute.


Structure:

for the structure of the song, it starts off  as an intro which lasts for 2 bars with a different section from the song he sampled which then drop into the chorus with the main sampled flute he sampled. then the verse kicks in which last for 12 bars. then as followed the chorus etc. after the 3rd chorus he repeats it again with another 8 bars.

Lyrics:

The lyrics for this so has a real feeling of how it feels to be in love with someone. What J cole usually tries to do with his lyrics is to paint you a picture of a story he is rapping/singing about  and this song is no acceptation. He paints an image of a guy falling in loving how can't sleep can't eat keeps writing love song thinking about the one he love. His flow for this song is not at all aggressive but calm with fits for this song. the singers flow (Miguel)  is smooth which fit perfectly for the chorus. J cole and producer Elite came up the lyrics for the song. there also 2 or 3 offensive words in it to also sure the love can be frustrating as well.  

my project presentation

The feedback I got from my classmate was that I should first and for most get a band to preform and fast. they also said when making my original song i should keep it simple and when preforming take the drums out and let a drummer drum on it.

With these feedback i'm taking in to heart and doing every I can do to at least came close to reach those goal. How I will reach these goals is to do a 4 week schedule of rehearsing since the L3 performance have band workshop from the beginning of the term. This will help to balance out my original songs and covers and also time to edit things that needed editing.  

case study

In this case study i'm going to look at j cole and how his chords and lyrics work with each other and with that i'm hoping to achieve in my music. The area I need to work on it the use of complex chords and J Cole is a great example of the and a good example of is work is not to self.

with the chords in this song their very simple and repetition. the reason for that is to give the lyrics and the other instrument in the song more room in the song. With his lyrics it like he's telling a story. He sings about his childhood with his mother and how much he loves her and in the chorus he talks about himself and how he all see things positive. In the rap part there no specific subject he talks about. In this song, he raps and sings the chorus and verses . how he goes about doing is that he sing the first verse and the chorus and then switches the verse to rapping then switches it back. With his vocals in this song, they are the melody of the song which work well with the bass and piano.    

this song by j Cole has really complex chords and I've been trying to work out them out
working out the chords for this song I've come to a conclusion that the chords contain for the verses

B Major
E Minor
C Major
and  G Minor.

The lyrics in this song talk about love and the feeling you get over it. he talk about no matter who no matter where no matter how you will feel it. Thought out the song he sings the song instead of rapping.Then he dose an outro. The vocals follows with the chords both in the verse and the chorus.



With researching J cole's song I tried to copy some of his ideas like lyric, song structure, chords and how he wrote his lyrics that fit with the beat of the song. How would try copy these feature J Cole presented is to follow the same why he made his song and sings/rap the same type of genre he sings/raps about. for the chords, I will learn them and then play them in different ways.

Here an example of one of my work.